OMG claire213

I could use some more advice on what I've added! Any ideas??

like after he talks about the traffic being like trying to run in chest-high water. but i edited stuff, so basically all of chapter two (which is completed) is new.

heh, few more edits included :]

mk, i made the edits to ch. 1-- fixed typos and redundancys (sp?) and added to convo with bit and fixed thing about dad. I also fixed the bit with ...

oh man. i wrote like... half of it at 1 in the morning. i was dropping off my ass tired, which is why there are a lot of fixers to ...

GAH! the paragraphs aren't working, so basically whenever it skips to the line below and starts as a new sentence, or something being said, it's a paragraph. cept the spoken ...

Sorry about the spacing. I highlighted and copied from my WordPerfect document, and i guess the spacing didn't transfer. I was really tired last night when i posted it! there ...

to whence: i have been writing for about three years and just recently switched this forum. i've kind of adapted a style, and this is very similar to my style, ...